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If You Had A Choice by ~Smerek:iconSmerek:



If you had the choice not to die,
You would gladly have taken the oppurtunity without a thought in your mind.
You never had the choice of when you wanted to go.
Damn I missed those days with you watching it snow.
I would glady replace your soul with mine,
Giving you the oppurtunity to be just fine.
If I had the choice to turn back time,
I would have been right there always by your side.
©2006-2010 ~Smerek
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Author's Comments

Well this is another poem about my Grandmother's death, one I wrote actually later down the road. I know you guys are going to get sick of these, but they mean a lot to me.

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:iconjadethepredator:
Hey, at least she's in a better place, right? And you can always visit and revisit her in dreams...

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I laugh at your misfortune cookies! Bwahahahaha! :pointandlaugh:
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Thats Beautiful

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If I Die, I Still Win
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I think this poem is suited for anyone who has lost someone dear... It's beautiful

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Urge...to...click...buttons...with...unclear functions...MUST...be...stopped! :dontclick:

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June 29, 2006
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